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literature essay

I want to fix this paper (it is attached ) look at the Dr. comments and the 


and you must do the following:

– only one idea by paragraph (keep the idea that related to the thesis )

– textual analysis

– make it clear (which side is the writer  is on which side of the argument ) 

– discussion of the novel

– citations are very important

– make the essay related to the thesis  

– new conclusion (the one that I have is wrong )